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### Keep Your Profits
> Audience: This pitch is targeted toward Web2 businesses whom offer products and services to a large user base.
> Audience: This pitch is targeted towards Web2 businesses who offer products and services to a large user base.
Compared to traditional Web2 systems, Web3 systems allows you to remove middlemen between you and your customers.
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Web3 applications allow you to build ecosystems which are native to your application.
Because Polkadot keeps the cost of deploying, using, and scaling Web3 applications low, you get to **keep your profits** generated by your community.
Because Polkadot keeps the cost of deploying, using, and scaling Web3 applications low, you get to **keep your profits**.
### Full Control
> Audience: This pitch is targeted toward engineering experts who want to innovate in Web3 without having to rebuild or establish everything from scratch.
> Audience: This pitch is targeted towards engineering experts who want to innovate in Web3 without having to rebuild or establish everything from scratch.
The Polkadot Cloud is the most flexible Web3 platform for applications and services.
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- Pay fees with ANY token.
- Eliminate user fees all together!
- Direct control over transaction ordering and priority.
- Have direct control over transaction ordering and priority.
- Write your state transition function in any programming language.
- and more...
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### Resilience at Every Layer
> Audience: This pitch is targeted toward someone who is Web3 focused. Someone who believes in the underlying mission of what Bitcoin and Ethereum have been bringing to the world.
> Audience: This pitch is targeted towards someone who is Web3 focused. Someone who believes in the underlying mission of what Bitcoin and Ethereum have been bringing to the world.
The Polkadot ecosystem prioritizes **resilience at every layer** of the network.
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The Polkadot Hub has native access to stable coins like USDC and USDT, as well as all of the tokens from the Polkadot ecosystem. The Polkadot Hub also has trustless bridges to Ethereum and other top blockchain ecosystems, meaning that you have worry-free access to basically any token within the crypto market.
On the Polkadot Hub, you can pay fees with any of these tokens. You can even hold stablecoins without needing any other token on your account!
On the Polkadot Hub, you can pay transaction fees with any of these tokens, meaning you can even hold and use stablecoins without needing any other token!
The Polkadot Hub is a brand new, untapped resource for explosive product growth by tapping into one of the largest developer communities in the blockchain ecosystem.
With millions of users at your fingertips, there is no better place to launch than the Polkadot Hub.
With millions of users at your fingertips, there is no better place to launch than the Polkadot Hub. You can have your **launchpad ready In: 3, 2, 1...**
## Polkadot Fact Sheet
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- External Polkadot SDK usage:
- Avail (previously Polygon)
- Cardano Midnight
- Bittensor